humm..nice attempt...=)
This was cool...seems like it need some compression over there cuz it hears like distorted...idk if that is intentional but hears bad...there's not plenty of diversity there..the intro was way too long before the drums started ..and then it keeps making the same melody with different drums and that's it...almost no changes...anyway it was ok..try to use a higher tempo to add more adrenaline..make things that make the ppl to imagine fast chases or something like that...=)
anyway nice attempt though ...
;)